IUE-SFL · Writing Skills and Strategies · Student’s Copy

Unit 7
Work

An integrated descriptive paragraph: describe a job using a reading text and a talk.

Descriptive writing · integrated
A

Understand

About this text type

What is descriptive writing (integrated)?

A descriptive integrated paragraph describes a job by combining information from a reading text and a listening. You describe what the job involves, what it requires, and what makes it interesting or rewarding — using your own words throughout.

Purpose. to describe a job clearly and explain why it is important, interesting, or rewarding.

Key features

  • Begin with a topic sentence that names the job and uses a relative clause (who / which / that).
  • Describe what the job involves — what the person does, where they work, what skills they need.
  • Explain what makes the job interesting or rewarding, using evidence from both sources.
  • Combine details from the reading and the listening. Use your own words.
  • End with a personal comment or evaluation.

Remember — your paragraph has three parts

  1. Topic sentence. Name the job and say why it is interesting. Use a relative clause: who / which / that
  2. Body sentences. Describe what the job involves, needs, and looks like. Add evidence from both sources.
  3. Concluding sentence. Give a personal evaluation. Use In conclusion, / Overall,
B

Study

Grammar & vocabulary

Vocabulary bank

Word / phraseMeaningExample sentence
careerthe profession you follow as your life’s main workShe has built a very successful career in medicine.
professiona job requiring special training and qualificationsTeaching is a demanding but highly respected profession.
skillan ability developed through practice and experienceStrong communication is a key skill in almost any job.
rewardinggiving you a deep feeling of satisfaction and purposeHelping others makes the job feel truly rewarding.
demandingrequiring a lot of effort, skill, and timeWorking as a nurse is both rewarding and very demanding.
workplacethe environment or place where you do your jobA positive workplace improves both well-being and productivity.
colleaguea person you work alongside regularlyShe has supportive and knowledgeable colleagues.
responsibilitya duty or task you are required to carry outSenior doctors carry enormous professional responsibility.

Grammar Relative clauses — who / which / that

StructureExample
… who + verb (for people)A nurse is a professional who looks after sick and injured patients.
… which + verb (for things or places)Nursing is a profession which requires both skill and compassion.
… that + verb (for people or things)It is a job that makes a genuine difference to people’s lives.
TipUse a relative clause to combine two short sentences into one longer, more complex one.

Useful linking words Notice the example sentences — they show you exactly how to use each word.

Linking wordWhen to use itExample sentence
… who… / … which… / … that…To add detail about a person or thingA nurse is someone who provides vital daily care to patients.
First, / In addition,To add more descriptive informationIn addition, nurses provide emotional support to patients.
For example,To open a new sentence with an example. Followed by a comma.For example, they take blood pressure and change bandages.
such asTo give examples inside a sentence. Not followed by a comma.They perform practical tasks such as giving injections and changing bandages.
However,To contrast in a NEW sentence. Followed by a comma.The job is extremely demanding. However, it is deeply rewarding.
AlthoughTo contrast inside ONE sentence. No comma after it.Although the job is demanding, it is deeply rewarding.
Overall, / In conclusion,To give a personal final evaluationOverall, nursing is one of the most important careers.

Extra practice · Part A Two options are given for each gap. Only ONE is correct. Think carefully about the meaning before you choose.

1A surgeon is a specialist ?performs complex operations that can save lives.
2Medicine is a career ?demands years of study, dedication, and continuous learning.
3Working in healthcare can be extremely stressful. ?, it offers a deep sense of purpose and personal satisfaction.
4There are many careers in the public sector, ?teaching, nursing, and social work.
5?the salary is not always high, most teachers say they find their work genuinely meaningful.
6?, a career in engineering offers excellent job security, strong earning potential, and the chance to solve real-world problems.

Part B · Write your own Complete these sentences using your own ideas. Make sure each linking word is used correctly.

1A firefighter is someone who… person → who
2Architecture is a profession that… thing → that
3Working as a doctor can be exhausting. In addition,… add a detail
4There are many rewarding careers in education, such as… no comma after
5Although the job involves long hours,… contrast
6Overall,… your evaluation
C

Analyse

Sample paragraph

This is an integrated writing task. First read the text and listen to the talk, and take notes. Then study the sample paragraph to see how the notes are used.

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Read Underline the most important ideas.

ReadingWhat Does a Nurse Do?

Nursing is one of the most important and demanding professions in the world. Nurses work in hospitals, clinics, care homes, and community settings, where they look after sick, injured, and vulnerable people every day. Their daily duties involve monitoring patients’ health, administering medicines, assisting doctors with procedures, and keeping detailed medical records. Nurses also play a crucial emotional role — they listen to patients, answer their questions, and help them feel less frightened and more hopeful. To do this job well, nurses need to be caring, patient, observant, and capable of making quick decisions in high-pressure situations. They must also work effectively as part of a large, multidisciplinary team. Although nursing is an extremely demanding profession with long shifts and emotional challenges, it is also deeply rewarding. Many nurses say that seeing a patient recover and return home healthy makes every difficult moment worthwhile.

2

Listen Twice — take notes as you go.

ListeningA Day in the Life of a Nurse

Play it twice. Take notes as you listen.

3

Take notes One box for each source.

What does the job involve day-to-day?

Reading
Listening

What skills and qualities are needed?

Reading
Listening

What makes the job rewarding or difficult?

Reading
Listening
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Study the sample paragraph

Read the paragraph, then use the panel beside it to see how it is built. Click any row to light up that sentence.

An Interesting Job: The Nurse

One profession that I find enormously interesting and admirable is nursing — a career that is both one of the most important and one of the most demanding in the world. Nurses are healthcare professionals who work in hospitals, clinics, and care homes, where they look after sick and injured patients every single day. According to the reading, their daily work involves monitoring patients’ health, administering medicines, assisting doctors, and keeping careful records. In addition, they provide vital emotional support — listening to patients and helping them feel less frightened. As the listening transcript describes, a typical shift can last twelve hours or more, during which a nurse might take blood pressure readings, give injections, change bandages, comfort a worried patient, and help someone eat their lunch — all within the same morning. Although the work is physically exhausting and emotionally draining, it is also deeply rewarding. Most nurses say that seeing a patient recover and go home healthy makes every long shift worthwhile. Overall, nursing is a challenging but profoundly meaningful career, and I have enormous respect for everyone who chooses this profession.

Topic sentenceBody sentencesConcluding sentence

Discussion Talk to your partner.

  1. What details did the writer get from the reading? What came from the listening?
  2. Find two relative clauses in the sample paragraph. What do they add to the description?
  3. What job would you like to describe? What two key details would you include?
D

Practise

Controlled exercises

Exercise 1 Complete each sentence with who, which, or that.

1A teacher is someone helps students develop new knowledge and important skills.
2Engineering is a career requires strong analytical and mathematical abilities.
3She works in a clinic specialises in treating children with serious illnesses.
4A journalist is a professional investigates and reports on important news events.
5He has found a job involves frequent international travel and language skills.

Exercise 2 Match each job (1–4) to the correct description (A–D).

WordAnswerDefinition
1.  DoctorA.  a person who designs buildings and plans public spaces for communities
2.  ArchitectB.  a person who investigates serious crimes and helps bring criminals to justice
3.  JournalistC.  a person who examines patients, diagnoses illnesses, and prescribes treatment
4.  DetectiveD.  a person who researches current events and writes or reports on them for the public
E

Write

Your own paragraph

This is an integrated writing task. Read, listen and take notes first — then plan and write.

1

Read Take notes as you read.

ReadingWhat Does a Software Developer Do?

Software developers design and build the programs and applications that we use every day, from banking apps and online shops to video games. Most of them work for technology companies, banks or universities, although a growing number work from home as freelancers for clients in other countries. The job is far more varied than people imagine. A developer does not simply sit down and write code; they first have to understand exactly what a client needs, plan how the program will work, and then test it again and again in order to find and repair mistakes. This last stage, which is known as debugging, often takes longer than writing the program in the first place. Good developers need patience, strong logical thinking and excellent problem-solving skills. Communication matters just as much, because most software is built by teams in which designers, testers and project managers all have to understand one another. The work can be demanding: deadlines are tight, technology changes quickly, and developers have to keep learning new tools throughout their careers. In return, the profession offers good salaries, flexible working hours and the satisfaction of creating something that thousands of people will actually use.

2

Listen Twice — take notes as you go.

ListeningA Day in the Life of a Software Developer

Play it twice. Take notes as you listen.

3

Take notes One box for each source.

Where do they work?

Reading
Listening

What are the main duties and daily tasks?

Reading
Listening

What skills and qualities are needed?

Reading
Listening

What are the difficulties and rewards?

Reading
Listening
4

Plan and write

Describe a job you find interesting. Use your notes from the reading and the listening to write a paragraph of at least 130 words.

One paragraph · three parts · minimum 130 words.

My plan Notes first — then write.

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