IUE-SFL · Writing Skills and Strategies · Student’s Copy

Unit 4
Challenges

An opinion paragraph about a problem: name it, explain it, and offer a way through it.

Opinion writing · problems and solutions
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Understand

About this text type

What is opinion writing about a problem or challenge?

An opinion paragraph about a challenge states your view about why something is difficult, explains why it is a challenge, and may offer a solution or give advice.

Purpose. to express your view about a challenge and persuade the reader to take it seriously.

Key features

  • Name the challenge clearly and state your opinion about it in the topic sentence.
  • Use contrast linkers (although, however, despite) to show different sides of the issue.
  • Support your opinion with at least two reasons or examples.
  • End with advice, a solution, or a personal recommendation.

Remember — your paragraph has three parts

  1. Topic sentence. Name the challenge and state your opinion. Use I think / In my opinion, … is one of the biggest challenges…
  2. Body sentences. Give 2 reasons. Use because / As a result, / For example, / However,
  3. Concluding sentence. Give advice or a final thought. Use In conclusion, / To sum up,
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Study

Grammar & vocabulary

Vocabulary bank

Word / phraseMeaningExample sentence
challengesomething difficult that needs effort and courage to deal withTime management is a major challenge for university students.
overcometo succeed in dealing with a problem or difficultyWith support and planning, you can overcome most challenges.
stressa feeling of worry, anxiety or mental pressureExam season causes a lot of stress for many students.
manageto deal successfully with a difficult situationIt is very hard to manage a busy schedule without good planning.
pressurea feeling of being forced to perform well or succeedThere is enormous pressure on students to achieve high grades.
affectto have an impact on someone or somethingChronic stress can seriously affect your sleep and concentration.
solutiona way to fix or resolve a problemA simple solution is to make a weekly to-do list every Monday.
balancekeeping different areas of life at the right levelIt is vital to balance study, work, and personal time.

Grammar because / Although / However / As a result,

StructureExample
… because + reasonMany students feel anxious because they have too much work.
Although + clause, …Although the challenge is serious, they can overcome it with planning.
… However, …University life is exciting. However, it can also be extremely stressful.
… As a result, …Students do not sleep enough. As a result, they feel tired in class.

Useful linking words Notice the example sentences — they show you exactly how to use each word.

Linking wordWhen to use itExample sentence
becauseTo explain the reason for somethingMany students feel stressed because they have too much work.
AlthoughTo show a contrast within one sentenceAlthough the challenge is serious, they can overcome it with planning.
However,To introduce a contrasting idea in a new sentenceUniversity is exciting. However, it is also very stressful.
As a result,To show the consequence or effect of somethingHe did not sleep enough. As a result, he was tired all day.
In conclusion,To summarise and end the paragraphIn conclusion, time management is a skill we must all learn.

Extra practice · Part A Choose the best linking word or phrase for each sentence.

1Many students feel tired ?they stay up late at night.
2?online classes are convenient, some students prefer face-to-face lessons.
3She did not study regularly for the exam. ?, she received a low grade.
4Learning a foreign language is difficult. ?, it can also be very rewarding.
5?, students should balance their studies and free time carefully.

Part B Rewrite each pair of sentences using the linker in brackets. Keep the meaning the same.

1Many students feel stressed. They have too much homework. because
2The weather was very cold. They still went camping. Although
3He did not sleep enough last night. He was very tired in class today. As a result,
4University life can be challenging. Many students enjoy it. However,
5She practised speaking English every day. Her speaking skills improved quickly. As a result,
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Analyse

Sample paragraph

Read the paragraph, then use the panel beside it to see how it is built. Click any row to light up that sentence.

The Challenge of Managing Time

In my opinion, one of the biggest challenges for young people today is managing their time well. Students have many competing demands every day — attending classes, completing assignments, preparing for exams, and spending time with friends. As a result, many of them feel constantly tired, stressed, and overwhelmed, which negatively affects both their academic performance and their mental health. For example, I often spend too much time on social media in the evenings, and then I do not have enough time to finish my assignments properly. This makes me feel anxious and unprepared the following morning. Although this challenge is very common, I believe students can solve it with a little organisation and self-discipline. Students can use simple but effective strategies such as making a to-do list at the start of each week, setting clear daily priorities, and limiting phone use during study time. In conclusion, time management is one of the most difficult but most important skills a student can develop, and everyone should try to practise it every single day.

Topic sentenceBody sentencesConcluding sentence

Discussion Talk to your partner.

  1. What challenge does the writer describe? Do you personally face this challenge?
  2. What solution does the writer suggest? Do you think it is realistic and useful?
  3. Find the contrast linker Although in the paragraph. What two ideas does it connect?
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Practise

Controlled exercises

Exercise 1 Connect the two sentences using the word given. Write the new sentence.

1Students feel tired. / They do not sleep enough. because
2University life is very busy. / It is also exciting. Although
3Many students skip breakfast. / They feel hungry in class. As a result,

Exercise 2 Read the paragraph. Which sentence does each job?

Peer Pressure

1 I believe that peer pressure is one of the biggest challenges for teenagers today. 2 When young people want to fit in with their friends, they sometimes make decisions that go against their own values. 3 For example, they might stay out too late or ignore their studies in order to seem popular. 4 This can seriously affect their school results and their well-being. 5 However, teenagers who have supportive families and good friends around them are much better able to resist pressure and make their own choices. 6 In conclusion, peer pressure is a serious and very real challenge, but with the right support, young people can learn to stay true to themselves.

1The topic sentence is sentence .
2The concluding sentence is sentence .

Exercise 3 Using the same paragraph above, complete the table.

1Topic / main idea
2Example of peer pressure
3Negative effect
4Possible solution
5Final opinion
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Write

Your own paragraph

What is one challenge that young people face today? Write a paragraph of at least 130 words.

One paragraph · three parts · minimum 130 words.

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Vocabulary review — Units 3 & 4

Covers both units

Part A · Gap fill Complete each sentence with a word from the box. You will not need all the words.

balancespaciousefficientrun-downsolutionovercome
1Some of the older bus stations are and very uncomfortable to wait in.
2Most students can the challenges of university life with careful planning.
3The best to exam stress is to start revising early and sleep well.
4It is essential to studying with rest and leisure to stay healthy.
5We need a more bus service — at the moment, the buses are late almost every day.

Part B · Word formation Write the correct form of the word in brackets to complete each sentence.

1Exam season is an extremely time for most university students. (stress)
2The metro is fast, clean and remarkably . (efficiency)
3Learning a new language is a but very rewarding experience. (challenge)
4A well- timetable helps students avoid burnout and stay healthy. (balance)
5Poor time is one of the biggest problems students face at university. (manage)