Understand
About this text typeWhat is descriptive writing about a place or system?
A descriptive paragraph about a place or system describes what exists there, what it looks and feels like, and what your overall impression is. You help the reader understand what the place or system is really like.
Purpose. to help the reader understand and visualise a place, system or environment.
Key features
- Use There is / There are to introduce what exists in the place.
- Use prepositions of place (along, next to, opposite, between) to show where things are.
- Describe both the positive aspects and the problems — this makes your text balanced.
- End with your overall personal impression.
Remember — your paragraph has three parts
- Topic sentence. Introduce the place or system and give your general impression of it.
- Body sentences. Describe what exists. Use There is / There are / Also, / However, / For example
- Concluding sentence. Give your overall impression or opinion. Use Overall, / To sum up, / In conclusion
Study
Grammar & vocabularyVocabulary bank
| Word / phrase | Meaning | Example sentence |
|---|---|---|
| modern | recently built or updated — new in design or technology | The city has a very modern metro that opened just three years ago. |
| spacious | large and having plenty of room inside | The new terminal is bright, airy, and very spacious. |
| run-down | in poor condition; needing repair or renovation | Some of the old bus stations are run-down and uncomfortable. |
| well-maintained | kept in good condition through regular care — the opposite of run-down | The central station is large, clean, and well-maintained. |
| well-connected | linked to many places by different transport options | Living near the station is convenient — the area is very well-connected. |
| lively | full of energy, colour, noise and activity | The market square is a lively and vibrant place at weekends. |
| efficient | working well without wasting time or energy | The metro is fast, clean, and remarkably efficient. |
| vibrant | full of life, colour and excitement | The old harbour is a vibrant and popular area for both locals and tourists. |
Grammar Describing with adjectives — key structures
| Structure | Example |
|---|---|
| subject + be + adjective(s) | The metro is modern, fast, and very efficient. / The buses are old and unreliable. |
| subject + have / has + (adj) + noun | The city has an excellent metro network. / The station has a large, spacious waiting area. |
| There is + (adj) + noun | There is a busy central station near the university. |
| There are + (adj) + plural noun | There are several well-maintained parks along the riverside. |
| Adjective collocations — learn these together | a reliable service · a crowded platform · a well-connected district · a run-down building |
Useful linking words Notice the example sentences — they show you exactly how to use each word.
| Linking word | When to use it | Example sentence |
|---|---|---|
| There is / There are… | To say what exists in the place | There is a metro line in the city centre. |
| Also, / In addition, | To add another detail | There are also many bus routes along the main roads. |
| However, | To describe a problem or contrast | However, the buses become very crowded at rush hour. |
| For example, | To open a sentence with a specific example | For example, a metro journey costs far less than a taxi. |
| such as | To give examples inside a sentence. Not followed by a comma. | My city has several options such as buses, trams, and a metro. |
Extra practice · Part A Choose the best linking word or phrase for each sentence.
Part B Complete these sentences about your own city or town using your own ideas.
Part C · Make it vivid Each sentence below is too basic. Rewrite it, adding at least TWO adjectives or descriptive phrases from the vocabulary bank.
Analyse
Sample paragraphRead the paragraph, then use the panel beside it to see how it is built. Click any row to light up that sentence.
Transport in My City
The transport system in my city is quite good overall, but it also has some significant problems. There is a modern metro network that connects many parts of the city from north to south, and there are also dozens of bus routes and two tram lines that run throughout the day. Most people choose to use public transport because it is much cheaper and faster than driving during busy periods. For example, a single metro journey costs very little and takes only fifteen minutes, whereas driving the same distance at rush hour can take over an hour. However, during rush hour in the mornings and evenings, the buses and trams become extremely crowded and often arrive late — this can be very frustrating for daily commuters. There are also no dedicated bike lanes on most roads, which makes cycling unsafe. Overall, the transport system in my city is improving slowly, but the city still needs to spend more money to make it more comfortable, safe, and reliable.
Discussion Talk to your partner.
- How does the writer’s city compare with your own city’s transport? What is similar? What is different?
- Which linking words does the writer use? Could you replace any of them with different ones?
- If you were rewriting this paragraph, what would you change?
Practise
Controlled exercisesExercise 1 Read the paragraph, then complete the table by noting which part of the text does each job.
A Busy City Centre
My city centre is a lively and convenient place, but it also has a few problems. There are many cafés, restaurants, and shops in the main streets, and there is also a large shopping mall near the central square. Many people enjoy spending time there because it is easy to walk around and there are many things to do. For example, families often visit the parks and outdoor cafés at weekends to relax and spend time together. However, the city centre becomes very crowded in the evenings and at weekends, so it can sometimes be noisy and stressful. There is also a serious parking problem because there are not enough parking spaces for visitors. Overall, the city centre is an enjoyable place to visit, but the city needs to make some improvements to make it more comfortable for everyone.
Write
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