IUE-SFL · Writing Skills and Strategies · Teacher’s Copy

Unit 4
Challenges

An opinion paragraph about a problem: name it, explain it, and offer a way through it.

Opinion writing · problems and solutions

Teacher’s notes — Unit 4: Opinion writing (Challenges / problems)

Text type. Opinion paragraph about a challenge — names the problem, explains it, offers a solution.

Key teaching points

  • Although is introduced here as a one-sentence contrast structure. Contrast it with However (two sentences). Both appear in Part A.
  • The sample paragraph uses a personal example (“I often spend too much time on social media”). Encourage students to do the same in Part E.
  • Exercise 2 asks students to identify the topic and concluding sentences — good metacognitive practice before Unit 5.
  • In print, Exercise 2 asks students to underline and circle. Here the sentences are numbered and students choose a number, which marks itself; the thinking is identical.
  • Every word in the Units 3 & 4 review now comes from one of the two units’ vocabulary banks, so students who revise the banks meet nothing unfamiliar.

Common student error. Confusing Although and However. Drilling with parallel sentences helps: Although I was tired, I finished my work. / I was tired. However, I finished my work.

A

Understand

About this text type

What is opinion writing about a problem or challenge?

An opinion paragraph about a challenge states your view about why something is difficult, explains why it is a challenge, and may offer a solution or give advice.

Purpose. to express your view about a challenge and persuade the reader to take it seriously.

Key features

  • Name the challenge clearly and state your opinion about it in the topic sentence.
  • Use contrast linkers (although, however, despite) to show different sides of the issue.
  • Support your opinion with at least two reasons or examples.
  • End with advice, a solution, or a personal recommendation.

Remember — your paragraph has three parts

  1. Topic sentence. Name the challenge and state your opinion. Use I think / In my opinion, … is one of the biggest challenges…
  2. Body sentences. Give 2 reasons. Use because / As a result, / For example, / However,
  3. Concluding sentence. Give advice or a final thought. Use In conclusion, / To sum up,
B

Study

Grammar & vocabulary

Vocabulary bank

Word / phraseMeaningExample sentence
challengesomething difficult that needs effort and courage to deal withTime management is a major challenge for university students.
overcometo succeed in dealing with a problem or difficultyWith support and planning, you can overcome most challenges.
stressa feeling of worry, anxiety or mental pressureExam season causes a lot of stress for many students.
manageto deal successfully with a difficult situationIt is very hard to manage a busy schedule without good planning.
pressurea feeling of being forced to perform well or succeedThere is enormous pressure on students to achieve high grades.
affectto have an impact on someone or somethingChronic stress can seriously affect your sleep and concentration.
solutiona way to fix or resolve a problemA simple solution is to make a weekly to-do list every Monday.
balancekeeping different areas of life at the right levelIt is vital to balance study, work, and personal time.

Grammar because / Although / However / As a result,

StructureExample
… because + reasonMany students feel anxious because they have too much work.
Although + clause, …Although the challenge is serious, they can overcome it with planning.
… However, …University life is exciting. However, it can also be extremely stressful.
… As a result, …Students do not sleep enough. As a result, they feel tired in class.

Useful linking words Notice the example sentences — they show you exactly how to use each word.

Linking wordWhen to use itExample sentence
becauseTo explain the reason for somethingMany students feel stressed because they have too much work.
AlthoughTo show a contrast within one sentenceAlthough the challenge is serious, they can overcome it with planning.
However,To introduce a contrasting idea in a new sentenceUniversity is exciting. However, it is also very stressful.
As a result,To show the consequence or effect of somethingHe did not sleep enough. As a result, he was tired all day.
In conclusion,To summarise and end the paragraphIn conclusion, time management is a skill we must all learn.

Extra practice · Part A Choose the best linking word or phrase for each sentence.

1Many students feel tired ?they stay up late at night.
because — The gap is in the middle of one sentence, not between two. Only one of these can join a reason to a result inside a single sentence.
2?online classes are convenient, some students prefer face-to-face lessons.
Although — The two halves disagree — convenient, but still not preferred. That is a contrast, not a consequence.
3She did not study regularly for the exam. ?, she received a low grade.
As a result — The low grade is the consequence of not studying — it is not an instance of it.
4Learning a foreign language is difficult. ?, it can also be very rewarding.
However — Difficult and rewarding pull against each other, and this is not the last sentence.
5?, students should balance their studies and free time carefully.
In conclusion — This sentence gives final advice, so it closes the paragraph.

Part B Rewrite each pair of sentences using the linker in brackets. Keep the meaning the same.

1Many students feel stressed. They have too much homework. because
Model. Many students feel stressed because they have too much homework.
2The weather was very cold. They still went camping. Although
Model. Although the weather was very cold, they still went camping.
3He did not sleep enough last night. He was very tired in class today. As a result,
Model. He did not sleep enough last night. As a result, he was very tired in class today.
4University life can be challenging. Many students enjoy it. However,
Model. University life can be challenging. However, many students enjoy it.
5She practised speaking English every day. Her speaking skills improved quickly. As a result,
Model. She practised speaking English every day. As a result, her speaking skills improved quickly.
C

Analyse

Sample paragraph

Read the paragraph, then use the panel beside it to see how it is built. Click any row to light up that sentence.

The Challenge of Managing Time

In my opinion, one of the biggest challenges for young people today is managing their time well. Students have many competing demands every day — attending classes, completing assignments, preparing for exams, and spending time with friends. As a result, many of them feel constantly tired, stressed, and overwhelmed, which negatively affects both their academic performance and their mental health. For example, I often spend too much time on social media in the evenings, and then I do not have enough time to finish my assignments properly. This makes me feel anxious and unprepared the following morning. Although this challenge is very common, I believe students can solve it with a little organisation and self-discipline. Students can use simple but effective strategies such as making a to-do list at the start of each week, setting clear daily priorities, and limiting phone use during study time. In conclusion, time management is one of the most difficult but most important skills a student can develop, and everyone should try to practise it every single day.

Topic sentenceBody sentencesConcluding sentence

Discussion Talk to your partner.

  1. What challenge does the writer describe? Do you personally face this challenge?
  2. What solution does the writer suggest? Do you think it is realistic and useful?
  3. Find the contrast linker Although in the paragraph. What two ideas does it connect?
  • The challenge. Managing time well. Answers about their own experience will vary — push for a specific situation (a deadline, a week, an app) rather than “yes, me too”.
  • The solution. A weekly to-do list, clear daily priorities, and limiting phone use during study time. Students often say lists are unrealistic; that disagreement is useful, as long as they say why and offer something better.
  • <em>Although</em>. It connects “this challenge is very common” with “students can solve it with organisation and self-discipline” — a concession followed by the writer’s real point. Contrast this with However, which would need two separate sentences.
D

Practise

Controlled exercises

Exercise 1 Connect the two sentences using the word given. Write the new sentence.

1Students feel tired. / They do not sleep enough. because
Model. Students feel tired because they do not sleep enough.
2University life is very busy. / It is also exciting. Although
Model. Although university life is very busy, it is also exciting.
3Many students skip breakfast. / They feel hungry in class. As a result,
Model. Many students skip breakfast. As a result, they feel hungry in class.

Exercise 2 Read the paragraph. Which sentence does each job?

Peer Pressure

1 I believe that peer pressure is one of the biggest challenges for teenagers today. 2 When young people want to fit in with their friends, they sometimes make decisions that go against their own values. 3 For example, they might stay out too late or ignore their studies in order to seem popular. 4 This can seriously affect their school results and their well-being. 5 However, teenagers who have supportive families and good friends around them are much better able to resist pressure and make their own choices. 6 In conclusion, peer pressure is a serious and very real challenge, but with the right support, young people can learn to stay true to themselves.

1The topic sentence is sentence .
1 — It names the challenge and states the writer’s opinion, with no linking word in front of it.
2The concluding sentence is sentence .
6 — It adds no new information — it restates the challenge and ends on a hopeful note.

Exercise 3 Using the same paragraph above, complete the table.

1Topic / main idea
Model. Peer pressure is one of the biggest challenges for teenagers.
2Example of peer pressure
Model. Staying out late or ignoring studies to seem popular with friends.
3Negative effect
Model. Seriously affects school results and personal well-being.
4Possible solution
Model. Having supportive families and good friends helps teenagers resist pressure.
5Final opinion
Model. With the right support, young people can learn to stay true to themselves.
E

Write

Your own paragraph

What is one challenge that young people face today? Write a paragraph of at least 130 words.

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Task. What is one challenge that young people face today? Write a paragraph of at least 130 words.
156 words · band: strong pass

In my opinion, one of the most serious challenges facing young people today is managing the pressure of academic expectations. Topic sentence: names the challenge + clear opinion Many university students have to balance attending lectures, completing assignments, preparing for exams, and maintaining a social life all at the same time. As a result, a large number of them experience high levels of stress and anxiety, which can seriously affect both their mental health and their academic performance. For example, during exam periods, I often feel so overwhelmed that I find it difficult to sleep or concentrate, which makes everything even harder. As a result + personal example Although this challenge is very common, students can overcome it with a little organisation. Simple strategies such as creating a weekly study plan, taking regular breaks, and asking for help from tutors can make a significant difference. In conclusion, managing academic pressure is one of the most important skills a student can develop, and universities should provide more practical support to help. Although + solution + conclusion

Marking focusChallenge clearly named in the topic sentencebecause / As a result / Although all usedA personal example includedA realistic solution offered before the conclusion

Optional activity

Problem–solution letter

25–30 minutes · Writing → real-world application

  1. Students write a short letter (150 words) to the university president about one challenge students face at their institution.
  2. Requirements: the topic sentence must name the challenge; because and as a result must both appear; one specific example; a realistic solution; and a closing call to action.
  3. In groups, students vote on the most convincing letter and the group representative reads it aloud.

Extension. Discuss as a class: was the argument persuasive? Was the solution realistic?

R

Vocabulary review — Units 3 & 4

Covers both units

Part A · Gap fill Complete each sentence with a word from the box. You will not need all the words.

balancespaciousefficientrun-downsolutionovercome

Not used: spacious

1Some of the older bus stations are and very uncomfortable to wait in.
run-down — After are you need an adjective meaning “in poor condition, needing repair”.
2Most students can the challenges of university life with careful planning.
overcome — After can you need a base verb meaning to deal with something successfully.
3The best to exam stress is to start revising early and sleep well.
solution — After The best you need a noun — a way of fixing a problem.
4It is essential to studying with rest and leisure to stay healthy.
balance — After to you need a verb. It goes with the pattern … X with Y.
5We need a more bus service — at the moment, the buses are late almost every day.
efficient — After a more you need an adjective meaning “working well without wasting time”.

Part B · Word formation Write the correct form of the word in brackets to complete each sentence.

1Exam season is an extremely time for most university students. (stress)
stressful — You need an adjective before time. Which ending turns a noun into “full of”?
2The metro is fast, clean and remarkably . (efficiency)
efficient — After remarkably you need an adjective, not the noun.
3Learning a new language is a but very rewarding experience. (challenge)
challenging — It sits beside rewarding, so it must take the same adjective ending.
4A well- timetable helps students avoid burnout and stay healthy. (balance)
balanced — After well- you need a past participle used as an adjective.
5Poor time is one of the biggest problems students face at university. (manage)
management — This is the subject of the sentence, so you need a noun — and it pairs with time.
✓

Answer key at a glance

Prints with the page
B · Part A
1 feel tired … stay up latebecause
2 online classes convenient … prefer face-to-faceAlthough
3 did not study … low gradeAs a result
4 difficult … rewardingHowever
5 balance studies and free timeIn conclusion
B · Part B — rewriting
becauseMany students feel stressed because they have too much homework.
AlthoughAlthough the weather was very cold, they still went camping.
As a result,He did not sleep enough last night. As a result, he was very tired in class today.
However,University life can be challenging. However, many students enjoy it.
As a result,She practised speaking English every day. As a result, her speaking skills improved quickly.
D · Exercise 1 — joining sentences
becauseStudents feel tired because they do not sleep enough.
AlthoughAlthough university life is very busy, it is also exciting.
As a result,Many students skip breakfast. As a result, they feel hungry in class.
D · Exercise 2 — Peer Pressure
Topic sentenceSentence 1
Concluding sentenceSentence 6
D · Exercise 3 — table
Topic / main ideaPeer pressure is one of the biggest challenges for teenagers.
Example of peer pressureStaying out late or ignoring studies to seem popular with friends.
Negative effectSeriously affects school results and personal well-being.
Possible solutionHaving supportive families and good friends helps resist pressure.
Final opinionWith the right support, young people can learn to stay true to themselves.
R · Review, Part A — gap fill
1run-down
2overcome
3solution
4balance
5efficient
Not usedspacious
R · Review, Part B — word formation
1 (stress)stressful
2 (efficiency)efficient
3 (challenge)challenging
4 (balance)balanced
5 (manage)management