IUE-SFL · Writing Skills and Strategies · Student’s Copy

Unit 8
Technology

An integrated opinion paragraph: both sides of technology, then your own reasoned conclusion.

Opinion writing · integrated
A

Understand

About this text type

What is opinion writing (integrated)?

An integrated opinion paragraph states and supports your personal view on technology by combining ideas from a reading text and a listening. You present both positive and negative effects, and then give your own reasoned conclusion.

Purpose. to state, support, and justify your opinion on technology using evidence from two sources.

Key features

  • State your opinion clearly in the topic sentence — use I think / I believe / In my opinion.
  • Present both positive and negative effects. Use evidence from your notes.
  • Use modal verbs (can, could, should, might) for ability, possibility and recommendations.
  • Combine ideas from the reading and the listening — use your own words.
  • End with a recommendation or a clear final opinion.

Remember — your paragraph has three parts

  1. Topic sentence. State your opinion on technology clearly. Use I think / I believe / In my opinion,
  2. Body sentences. Give 2–3 reasons from your notes, covering both positive and negative points. Use First of all, / However, / For example,
  3. Concluding sentence. Restate your opinion and give a recommendation. Use In conclusion, / To sum up,
B

Study

Grammar & vocabulary

Vocabulary bank

Word / phraseMeaningExample sentence
technologymachines and digital tools used in everyday modern lifeTechnology has transformed the way we communicate.
devicea piece of technology such as a phone, tablet, or laptopMost students carry at least one personal device.
social mediaapps and websites for sharing content and connectingSocial media has changed how people form and maintain relationships.
screen timethe total time you spend looking at a screen each dayResearch shows that excessive screen time affects sleep quality.
communicateto exchange information or ideas with othersWe can now communicate instantly with anyone, anywhere.
accessthe ability to find, reach, or use somethingThe internet gives students access to unlimited information.
distractionsomething that stops you from concentrating on your taskSmartphones can be a major distraction during study time.
beneficialhaving a positive and helpful effect on somethingRegular physical activity is beneficial for both mind and body.

Grammar Modal verbs — can / could / should / might

StructureExample
can + verb (ability or current possibility)Technology can connect people across the world in seconds.
could + verb (possibility or uncertain outcome)Too much screen time could have a serious effect on health.
should + verb (advice or recommendation)People should set firm daily limits on their screen time.
might + verb (future or uncertain possibility)Future technology might completely change the way we learn.

Useful linking words Notice the example sentences — they show you exactly how to use each word.

Linking wordWhen to use itExample sentence
I think / I believe / In my opinion,To state your personal opinionI believe that technology has mostly improved daily life.
First of all, / Secondly,To organise your reasons in orderFirst of all, technology has made communication much faster.
For example, / such asTo support your point with a specific exampleFor example, we can now video call anyone, anywhere, for free.
However, / On the other hand,To introduce a negative point or the other sideHowever, technology can also be a serious distraction.
In conclusion, / To sum up,To end with your final opinion and recommendationIn conclusion, technology is powerful — but we must use it wisely.

Extra practice · Part A Choose the best answer.

1?that social media does more harm than good for young people’s mental health.
2Technology has transformed healthcare. ?, doctors can now diagnose diseases using artificial intelligence that analyses thousands of patient records in seconds.
3Smartphones keep us constantly connected. ?, this constant connection makes it very difficult for people to ever truly switch off and rest.
4Technology improves our lives in many ways. ?, it has made education, communication, and healthcare faster and more accessible than ever before.
5?, technology is a powerful tool that can improve lives — but only if we learn to use it with care and balance.

Part B · Paragraph order These five sentences form a complete paragraph, but they are in the wrong order. Use the arrows to put them in order (1–5). The linking words are your clues.

  • ?AHowever, technology also has serious drawbacks. For example, many young people spend hours on social media instead of sleeping, exercising, or spending time with family.
  • ?BIn conclusion, technology is neither purely good nor purely bad — what matters most is how responsibly we choose to use it.
  • ?CI believe that technology has fundamentally changed the way we live.
  • ?DFirst of all, it has made access to information and education far easier than ever before.
  • ?ESecondly, it has allowed people across the world to communicate instantly, breaking down barriers of distance and language.
C

Analyse

Sample paragraph

This is an integrated writing task. First read the text and listen to the talk, and take notes. Then study the sample paragraph to see how the notes are used.

1

Read Underline the most important ideas.

ReadingThe Benefits of Technology

Technology has changed our lives in many profound and positive ways. First of all, it has revolutionised communication. People can now send instant messages, make video calls, and share news with friends and family anywhere in the world, completely for free. Secondly, technology has transformed access to education. Students can watch recorded lessons, use interactive educational apps, and find reliable information on almost any topic within seconds. This is particularly valuable for people who live in remote or rural areas, or who cannot easily attend formal schooling. In addition, technology has brought major advances in healthcare. Doctors now use sophisticated digital equipment to diagnose illnesses more accurately, monitor patients remotely, and share medical knowledge globally. For example, scanning technology can now detect serious diseases at a very early stage, which significantly improves patient outcomes and saves lives. In conclusion, technology has made many aspects of daily life easier, faster, safer, and more accessible than ever before.

2

Listen Twice — take notes as you go.

ListeningThe Problems with Technology

Play it twice. Take notes as you listen.

3

Take notes One box for each source.

How does technology affect communication and education?

Reading
Listening

How does technology affect health and wellbeing?

Reading
Listening

How does technology affect work and daily life overall?

Reading
Listening
4

Study the sample paragraph

Read the paragraph, then use the panel beside it to see how it is built. Click any row to light up that sentence.

Technology in Daily Life

I believe that technology has greatly and genuinely improved our daily lives, although it also brings some serious challenges that we all need to manage thoughtfully and responsibly. First of all, technology has made communication dramatically easier and faster. As the reading highlights, people can now make free video calls to anyone in the world and students can access high-quality educational resources from anywhere — benefits that were unimaginable just twenty years ago. Advances in healthcare technology are also saving lives by detecting diseases earlier and allowing doctors to share expertise globally. However, the listening transcript raises important concerns that we cannot ignore. Excessive screen time can seriously disrupt sleep and mental health, particularly among young people. Furthermore, artificial intelligence is already automating many jobs, putting millions of workers at risk. Privacy is also a growing concern, as companies quietly collect vast amounts of personal data from our devices. Therefore, I think governments should introduce clearer regulations to protect workers and users, and individuals should set firm limits on their daily screen time. In conclusion, technology is an enormously powerful tool that brings great benefits when used wisely and responsibly — but only if both individuals and societies make conscious, informed choices about how they use it.

Topic sentenceBody sentencesConcluding sentence

Discussion Talk to your partner.

  1. What positive effects does the writer mention? Which come from the reading?
  2. What negative effects does the writer describe? Which come from the listening?
  3. Do you agree with the writer’s overall opinion? What would you add or change?
D

Practise

Controlled exercises

Exercise 1 Look back at the sample paragraph in Section C, Step 4. Count the opinion phrases and the modal verbs. (Opinion phrases: I believe, I think, In my opinion… · Modal verbs: can, could, should, might…)

1I found opinion phrase(s).
2I found modal verb(s).

Exercise 2 Complete each sentence with a suitable modal verb: can / could / should / might

1Technology be used to give students in remote areas access to world-class education.
2Spending too much time on social media lead to feelings of anxiety and isolation.
3Governments introduce clear laws to protect people’s personal data online.
4In the future, intelligent robots perform many routine tasks in hospitals and offices.
E

Write

Your own paragraph

This is an integrated writing task. Read, listen and take notes first — then plan and write.

1

Read Take notes as you read.

ReadingHow Technology Has Changed the Way We Learn

Twenty years ago, a student who needed information had to travel to a library, search through a catalogue and hope that the right book was available. Today, almost everything has changed. Digital libraries give students immediate access to millions of books and academic articles, wherever they happen to be. Online courses allow anyone with an internet connection to study subjects that are not taught at their own school or university, and many of these courses are completely free. Video lessons are particularly useful, because a student who does not understand an explanation can simply watch it again as many times as necessary. Language learning has been transformed too: translation tools, pronunciation apps and video calls with speakers in other countries were unimaginable for earlier generations. Technology has also made learning far more flexible. Students who have a part-time job or family responsibilities can now study late at night or early in the morning, at their own speed. For students in small towns and rural areas the change has been even greater, because distance is no longer a barrier to a good education. None of this means that a screen is always the best place to learn. Students who read only short texts online often find it harder to concentrate on a long book, and information found in seconds is not always reliable. Used carefully — checking where information comes from, and still making time for long, deep reading — technology has made knowledge faster, cheaper and far more available than ever before.

2

Listen Twice — take notes as you go.

ListeningThe Hidden Cost of Convenience

Play it twice. Take notes as you listen.

3

Take notes One box for each source.

How does technology help?

Reading
Listening

What examples are given?

Reading
Listening

What problems or risks are there?

Reading
Listening

What should we do about it?

Reading
Listening
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Plan and write

Has technology improved your daily life? Use your notes from the reading and the listening to write a paragraph of at least 130 words.

One paragraph · three parts · minimum 130 words.

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R

Vocabulary review — Units 7 & 8

Covers both units · end of course

Part A · Gap fill Complete each sentence with a word from the box. You will not need all the words.

accessrewardingdemandingcolleaguesdistractionbeneficial
1Regular physical exercise is extremely for both your mental and physical health.
2Medicine is one of the most careers — it requires enormous dedication and long hours.
3She gets along very well with her and they often have lunch together after work.
4Smartphones can be a serious when you are trying to concentrate on your studies.
5The internet gives students to millions of books, journals, and educational resources.

Part B · Word formation Write the correct form of the word in brackets to complete each sentence.

1Good written and spoken is one of the most important skills in any job. (communicate)
2The app has been a major breakthrough that has changed the healthcare industry. (technology)
3She finds her job extremely because she gets to help people every single day. (reward)
4You need to be a with years of experience to apply for this senior position. (profession)
5Spending too much time on social media can be a real during study sessions. (distract)