Teacher’s notes — Unit 1: Descriptive writing (Lifestyles)
Text type. Descriptive paragraph about a free-time activity.
Key teaching points
- Students must not copy the question as their topic sentence. Model how to rephrase it.
- Insist on specific adjectives. Reject “nice” and “good” and ask “but what does it feel like?”
- The concluding sentence should express how the activity makes the student feel — not just repeat the topic.
- Part A item 1 is the only sentence that needs a contrast linker — use it to teach However.
Common student error. Beginning the paragraph with “In my free time I enjoy…” and then repeating that phrase in the concluding sentence. Push them towards a more evaluative close.
Understand
About this text typeWhat is descriptive writing?
A descriptive paragraph paints a picture with words. You describe a person, place, activity or lifestyle so that the reader can clearly imagine what you are writing about.
Purpose. to help the reader picture and understand what you are describing.
Key features
- Use specific adjectives to describe exactly what things look or feel like — not just “nice” or “good”.
- Use the present simple with frequency adverbs (always, usually, often) to describe habits and routines.
- Include at least one concrete example to make your description real and believable.
- End with a personal comment — how the activity or lifestyle makes you feel.
Remember — your paragraph has three parts
- Topic sentence. Introduce your topic in your own words. Do not copy the question.
- Body sentences. Give 3–4 descriptive details. Use linking words and at least one example.
- Concluding sentence. Give a personal comment on how the topic makes you feel. Use Overall, / To sum up,
Study
Grammar & vocabularyVocabulary bank
| Word / phrase | Meaning | Example sentence |
|---|---|---|
| activity | something you do for enjoyment or exercise | Cycling is my favourite outdoor activity. |
| free time | time when you are not studying or working | In my free time, I enjoy reading novels. |
| hobby | something you enjoy doing regularly | Her hobby is photography — she takes photos everywhere. |
| relaxing | helping you to rest and feel calm | I find swimming very relaxing after a stressful week. |
| outdoor | happening or done outside, in the open air | She prefers outdoor activities like hiking and cycling. |
| improve | to get better at something | Playing chess regularly can improve your thinking skills. |
| spend time | to use time doing a particular activity | I love spending time with friends at the weekend. |
| habit | something you do regularly, often without thinking | Going for a morning walk is a very healthy habit. |
Grammar Present simple + frequency adverbs
| Structure | Example |
|---|---|
| always / usually | I always go for a walk before breakfast. |
| often / sometimes | She often reads a book in the evenings. |
| rarely / never | He rarely stays at home at the weekend. |
| enjoy / love / like + -ing | I enjoy cooking healthy meals for my family. |
Useful linking words Notice the example sentences — they show you exactly how to use each word.
| Linking word | When to use it | Example sentence |
|---|---|---|
| First, / First of all | To begin your description | First of all, I usually go cycling at weekends. |
| Also, / In addition | To add another detail | I also enjoy hiking in the mountains near my city. |
| For example, / For instance | To give a specific example | For example, last month I discovered a beautiful new route. |
| However | To add a contrast | However, I find it difficult to go out when it rains. |
| To sum up | To end with a personal comment | To sum up, cycling keeps me healthy and very happy. |
Extra practice · Part A Choose the correct linking word.
Part B Complete these sentences with your own ideas.
Analyse
Sample paragraphRead the paragraph, then use the panel beside it to see how it is built. Click any row to light up that sentence.
A Love of Cycling
One activity I really enjoy in my free time is cycling. First, I usually go cycling at the weekends with my friends along the coastal road near our city, which is very beautiful and peaceful. Cycling is also very good for my health — for example, it helps me stay fit and reduces my stress after a busy week at university. In addition, I love cycling because it gives me a chance to discover new places. Last month, I found a small village that I had never visited before, and we had lunch at a lovely café there. However, I do find it difficult to stay motivated when the weather is cold or rainy, so in winter I prefer to exercise indoors. Overall, cycling is more than just a hobby for me — it keeps me healthy, happy, and connected to the world around me.
Discussion Talk to your partner.
- What specific words make this paragraph descriptive? Find three examples.
- Which sentence is the topic sentence? Why is it a good topic sentence?
- What linking words does the writer use? Could you replace any of them with different ones?
- Specific words. beautiful and peaceful, coastal road, a small village, a lovely café, healthy, happy, connected — push students past “nice” and “good” towards words that name what is actually seen or felt.
- Topic sentence. “One activity I really enjoy in my free time is cycling.” It names the activity in the writer’s own words and does not copy the question wording.
- Linking words. First / also / for example / In addition / However / Overall. Workable swaps: First of all, For instance, Furthermore, On the other hand, To sum up. Note that However cannot be swapped for an addition linker — the meaning changes.
Practise
Controlled exercisesExercise 1 Put the sentences in the correct order (1–5) to make a good paragraph. Use the arrows to move a sentence up or down.
- ?AFor example, I feel much calmer and happier after I finish playing.
- ?BIn conclusion, playing the guitar is one of my favourite ways to spend my free time.
- ?COne activity I enjoy in my free time is playing the guitar.
- ?DIt also helps me relax after a long and difficult day at university.
- ?EFirst of all, I practise for about an hour every evening after dinner.
Topic sentence: C · Concluding sentence: B
Exercise 2 Complete each sentence with the correct word from the box. Use each word once.
Write
Your own paragraphWhat activity do you enjoy in your free time? Write a paragraph of at least 130 words.
One paragraph · three parts · minimum 130 words.
My plan Notes first — then write.
Self-check Tick each box when you are sure.
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My paragraph
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Sample answer For modelling and for calibrating your marking.
Task. What activity do you enjoy in your free time? Write a paragraph of at least 130 words.
143 words · band: strong pass
One activity I genuinely love in my free time is cooking. Topic sentence — own words First of all, I enjoy experimenting with new recipes — for example, last month I made a traditional Turkish dish called mantı for my family, and everyone agreed it was delicious. In addition, cooking helps me feel calm and creative after a long and tiring day of university study. There is something deeply satisfying about turning simple, everyday ingredients into a meal that people around the table truly enjoy. Two detailed body ideas + example However, I sometimes find it difficult to cook when I have very little time during exam periods, so in those weeks I plan my meals carefully at the start of each week. Overall, cooking is much more than just a way to prepare food for me — it is a creative hobby that brings me real happiness and connects me to my culture and family. Concluding sentence with personal comment
Optional activity
My classmate’s hobby
- Students interview a partner about their hobby using three questions they write themselves (e.g. When did you start? How does it make you feel? What is one specific memory you have?)
- Students write a short descriptive paragraph (80–100 words) about their partner’s hobby in the third person, using the information they collected.
- Partners swap and check — is the description accurate? Is there a specific example?
Extension. Display paragraphs anonymously. The class guesses which student each paragraph describes.
Answer key at a glance
Prints with the page| B · Extra practice, Part A | |
| 1 summer outdoors / winter indoors | However |
| 2 many activities / last weekend hiking | For example |
| 3 fit and healthy / explore new places | In addition |
| 4 having a hobby is very important | To sum up |
| D · Exercise 1 — order | |
| Correct order | C → E → D → A → B |
| Topic sentence | C |
| Concluding sentence | B |
| D · Exercise 2 — word from the box | |
| 1 My favourite … is photography | hobby |
| 2 I usually … my weekends | spend |
| 3 I find painting very … | relaxing |
| 4 Playing sport regularly can … | improve |
| 5 She prefers … activities | outdoor |