Before you start — what this text type needs
Write one paragraph. Describe what the place or person looks, feels, or seems like. Use There is / There are to introduce what exists. Describe positives and problems to make your paragraph balanced. Include specific details and at least one example. End with a personal comment.
Teacher’s notes — Part 1: Extra writing tasks (Descriptive)
These four tasks recycle the descriptive skills from Units 1 and 3: specific adjectives, There is / There are, and a balanced paragraph that names problems as well as positives. They can be set as homework, as timed practice, or as a make-up task.
All four model answers deliberately include a problem. Students who describe only the good things have not met the brief, even if the language is strong — the brief at the top of the page says so explicitly.
Tasks 1, 3 and 4 describe places; task 2 describes a person. If you are setting only one, task 2 is the odd one out and works well as a contrast — it needs personality and a concrete example rather than There is / There are.
The model answers run to 150–155 words against a 130-word minimum. Show students that a strong answer sits a little above the minimum rather than exactly on it.
Describe your favourite place in your city or town
DescriptiveDescribe your favourite place in your city or town. Write a paragraph of at least 130 words.
One paragraph · three parts · minimum 130 words.
My plan Notes first — then write.
My paragraph
Nothing is saved automatically. Copy or save your paragraph before you close this tab — only your own writing is saved, not the exercises.
Model plan and answer For modelling and for calibrating your marking.
| Topic sentence | One of my favourite places in my city is the old waterfront park, which is a peaceful green space beside the river. |
| Body idea 1 | Describe its appearance — trees, benches, river views, atmosphere. |
| Body idea 2 | Mention a problem (litter, or noise at weekends) to show balance; add specific sensory detail. |
| Concluding sentence | Personal comment on why this place matters to you. |
Model answer · 147 words
One of my favourite places in my city is the old waterfront park, which is a peaceful green space beside the river in the heart of the city centre. There are tall oak trees that provide shade on hot summer days, wooden benches overlooking the water, and a wide path where people walk, jog, and cycle. In the early morning, the park is quiet and calm, with the soft sound of the river and the smell of freshly cut grass. There is also a small open-air café near the main entrance where local people often stop for tea or coffee. However, the park does have some problems. At weekends, it can become very crowded and noisy, and there is sometimes litter near the bins. Despite this, it remains a special place for me because it is where I feel most relaxed after a long and stressful week.
Describe a person in your family or a close friend who you admire
DescriptiveDescribe a person in your family or a close friend who you admire. Write a paragraph of at least 130 words.
One paragraph · three parts · minimum 130 words.
My plan Notes first — then write.
My paragraph
Nothing is saved automatically. Copy or save your paragraph before you close this tab — only your own writing is saved, not the exercises.
Model plan and answer For modelling and for calibrating your marking.
| Topic sentence | The person in my family I admire most is my older sister, who is one of the most determined and kind people I have ever met. |
| Body idea 1 | Appearance and personality: calm manner, warm smile, always ready to help. |
| Body idea 2 | A specific example of her determination (studying while working); acknowledge a flaw for balance. |
| Concluding sentence | Personal comment: what you have learned from her, or how she influences you. |
Model answer · 147 words
The person I admire most in my family is my older sister, who is one of the most determined and warm-hearted people I know. She is tall and slim, with dark hair and a calm, gentle manner that immediately puts people at ease. There is a quiet confidence about her that I have always found inspiring. One of the things I admire most is that she completed her university degree while working part-time to support herself financially, which required enormous dedication and self-discipline. She is also incredibly generous with her time and always willing to help others, whether that means giving advice, listening patiently, or solving a practical problem. However, she sometimes pushes herself too hard and forgets to rest. Despite this, she is a remarkable person who has taught me that with enough determination, it is possible to achieve your goals even when life is difficult.
Describe the area or neighbourhood where you live
DescriptiveDescribe the area or neighbourhood where you live. Write a paragraph of at least 130 words.
One paragraph · three parts · minimum 130 words.
My plan Notes first — then write.
My paragraph
Nothing is saved automatically. Copy or save your paragraph before you close this tab — only your own writing is saved, not the exercises.
Model plan and answer For modelling and for calibrating your marking.
| Topic sentence | The neighbourhood where I live is a lively residential area on the western edge of the city, which has a strong sense of community. |
| Body idea 1 | Streets, buildings, atmosphere: a mix of old and new, local shops, sounds and smells. |
| Body idea 2 | Problems: traffic, noise, lack of green space — balanced against the positives. |
| Concluding sentence | Personal comment on what makes it feel like home. |
Model answer · 156 words
The neighbourhood where I live is a lively, mixed residential area on the western edge of the city, and it has a strong sense of community that I genuinely appreciate. There are rows of four-storey apartment blocks alongside older, low-rise houses, and the streets are lined with small shops, a local market, and several tea houses where older residents gather every morning. The area always feels busy and full of life, with the smell of fresh bread from the bakery on the corner and the sound of children playing in the square nearby. There is also a small park with a fountain that is popular with families in the evenings. However, the neighbourhood does have some problems — the traffic can be very heavy during rush hour, and there is a lack of quiet green space for people who want to relax. Overall, it is a warm and welcoming place that I am proud to call home.
Describe a building or outdoor space on your university campus
DescriptiveDescribe a building or outdoor space on your university campus. Write a paragraph of at least 130 words.
One paragraph · three parts · minimum 130 words.
My plan Notes first — then write.
My paragraph
Nothing is saved automatically. Copy or save your paragraph before you close this tab — only your own writing is saved, not the exercises.
Model plan and answer For modelling and for calibrating your marking.
| Topic sentence | The main library on our university campus is an impressive modern building that is one of the most important spaces for student life. |
| Body idea 1 | Exterior and interior: glass walls, open-plan study areas, natural light, book collections. |
| Body idea 2 | Problems: very busy during exams; not enough group study rooms. |
| Concluding sentence | Personal comment on why you value this space. |
Model answer · 149 words
The main library on our university campus is an impressive five-storey building with a modern glass facade that allows natural light to flood through every floor. Inside, there are large open-plan study areas filled with long wooden desks, comfortable chairs, and computer terminals. There is also an extensive collection of academic books, journals, and digital resources that students can access at any time. The atmosphere inside the library is one of calm concentration — you can hear almost nothing except the quiet turning of pages and the soft hum of the ventilation system. However, during the examination period, the building becomes extremely crowded and it can be very difficult to find a quiet seat. There are also not enough private group study rooms, which makes collaborative work challenging. Despite these limitations, the library is my favourite place on campus and the space where I do my most productive academic work.