IUE-SFL · Level C Writing Skills · Student’s Copy

Unit 7
Advantages & Disadvantages 2

The same text type with a new topic – make your writing more cohesive with a wider range of linking words.

Course topic: Experts
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Building on Week 6

Advantage – disadvantage

This week you practise the same text type with a new topic. Try to make your writing more cohesive: connect your sentences smoothly and use a wider range of linking words. Keep the introduction – advantages – disadvantages – conclusion plan.

Reminder: write the advantages in one body paragraph and the disadvantages in the next. Give your opinion only in the conclusion.

Strategy – how to organise your text

1. Introduction: introduce the topic and say it has both good and bad sides.

2. Body 1: write about the advantages. Use “One advantage is… / Another benefit is…”

3. Body 2: write about the disadvantages. Use “One drawback is… / On the negative side…”

4. Conclusion: weigh both sides. You may give your opinion here.

Tip: two ways to organise

Plan A: all advantages, then all disadvantages (good for one topic).

Plan B: compare option A, then option B (good when two things are compared).

Clues – recognise this task

  • What are the advantages and disadvantages of…?
  • Write about the pros and cons of…
  • Are there any benefits or drawbacks to…?

Useful phrases

Introducing the topic

… has both advantages and disadvantages. / … has good points as well as bad points.

e.g. Working from home has both advantages and disadvantages.

Advantages

One (main) advantage is… / Another benefit is… / On the positive side…

e.g. One main advantage is that you save a lot of travelling time.

Disadvantages

One drawback is… / A disadvantage is… / On the negative side… / The main problem is…

e.g. One drawback is that you can feel lonely without your colleagues.

Concluding

In conclusion… / To sum up… / Weighing both sides… / In my opinion…

e.g. Weighing both sides, I believe the benefits are greater than the problems.

Useful linking devices for this text type

Use listing, addition, contrast, and example linkers.

FunctionLinkers
ListingFirstly, Secondly, Finally
AdditionMoreover, Furthermore, In addition, Also
ContrastHowever, On the other hand, On the negative side
Result / exampleAs a result, Therefore; For example, For instance
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Vocabulary check

Experts
Part 1

Match the words

Match each word (1–6) with its meaning (a–f). Choose the correct letter.

WordAnswerDefinition
1.  experiencea.  a person who knows a lot about one subject
2.  an expertb.  knowledge you get from doing something for a long time
3.  advicec.  very good at doing something
4.  to specialised.  an opinion about what someone should do
5.  reliablee.  to study or work in one particular area
6.  skilledf.  that you can trust
Part 2

Complete the sentences

Now complete each sentence with a word from the box. Change the form if necessary.

experienceexpertadvicespecialisereliableskilled
1After thirty years, she has a lot of in this job. She has learned so much from doing it for such a long time.
2A doctor is an in medicine. He has studied this one subject deeply for many years.
3I asked my teacher for about my essay. I wanted to know what I should do to make it better.
4He decided to in one type of law. He chose to study and work in only that single area.
5Their information is correct and . You can trust it completely, because they are almost never wrong.
6She is highly at fixing computers. She can repair almost any problem quickly and well.
Part 3

Complete the text

Complete the text below with the words and phrases from the box. Use each one once. The text is about the advantages and disadvantages of a topic.

For exampleOn the other handTo sum upOne advantageMoreoverAs a resultIn additionIn my opinionOne disadvantagehas both advantages and disadvantages

Working from home (1). On the positive side, it has several benefits. (2) is that workers save a lot of time, because they do not have to travel to an office every day. (3), they can work in comfortable clothes and plan their own day. (4), a parent who works from home can be near their children and still finish their job. (5), working from home also has some problems. (6) is that people can feel lonely, because they do not see their colleagues. (7), it is sometimes hard to concentrate at home, where there are many other things to do. (8), some workers do too little or too much, and they find it difficult to stop working in the evening. (9), working from home has clear good points and bad points. (10), it is a good choice for some jobs, but workers must be organised and keep in touch with other people.

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Sample answer

Read, listen, then study

Question: What are the advantages and disadvantages of becoming an expert in only one subject?

Read the text and the listening transcript below, then study the sample answer.

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Read

Reading

Today, many people choose to become experts in one narrow subject. There are clear advantages to this. An expert understands their field very deeply and can solve difficult problems that other people cannot. Companies need these people and trust their work. Experts are also respected, and they often earn good salaries because their skills are rare. However, there are also disadvantages. Someone who studies only one subject may know very little about other areas of life. This can make it harder to understand the bigger picture. If their job disappears because of new technology, it can be hard for them to find new work. Some experts also find their work boring after many years, because they always do the same kind of task. For these reasons, many people say it is wise to be an expert in one subject but also to learn some general skills. Because the world is changing so quickly, many people now try to combine deep knowledge with a few general skills. They become an expert in one area but also learn how to communicate, work in a team, and use new technology. This makes them more useful at work and helps them to adapt if their job changes in the future.

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Listen and read the transcript

Listening

Play it twice, then read the transcript.

Listening transcript

In our company, we employ many experts, and I can see both sides. Our top engineer knows everything about one type of machine, and when there is a serious problem, she is the only person who can fix it. That is a huge advantage, and we pay her well for her skill. On the other hand, she sometimes finds it hard to understand the wider business, because she only thinks about her machines. She does not always see how her work affects other teams. We also worry about what will happen when she retires, because no one else has her knowledge. In my opinion, it is good to be an expert, but it is also wise to learn some general skills, so that you can work well with other people and adapt when things change. In my experience, the best workers are experts who are also willing to keep learning. They know one subject very well, but they are curious about other areas too. When experts share their knowledge and listen to others, the whole company becomes stronger, and the experts themselves enjoy their work much more. That is why, in our company, we now ask our experts to spend a little time each month teaching their skills to younger workers.

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Study the sample answer

Becoming an Expert in One Subject

Introduction

Many people today choose to become experts in only one subject. This has both advantages and disadvantages.

Body 1

On the positive side, being an expert has clear benefits. Firstly, an expert understands their field deeply and can solve problems that others cannot. Secondly, experts are respected and often earn good salaries. For example, a skilled engineer may be the only person who can fix a serious problem. People with this kind of deep knowledge are hard to replace, so companies value them very highly.

Body 2

On the other hand, there are some drawbacks. One disadvantage is that experts may know very little about other areas of life. In addition, if their job disappears, it can be hard to find new work, and some experts find their work boring after many years. They may also miss the chance to try new and different kinds of work.

Conclusion

In conclusion, although being an expert can be limiting, it brings deep knowledge and respect. In my opinion, it is good to be an expert in one subject, but we should also learn some general skills. In this way, we can enjoy the rewards of deep knowledge while staying ready for a changing world. That, I believe, is the wisest path to follow.

IntroductionBodyConclusion

Notice the language

  • Body 1 lists the advantages; Body 2 lists the disadvantages.
  • Linking words (Firstly, Secondly, In addition) make the text cohesive.
  • The opinion is saved for the conclusion.
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Writing task 1

Read, listen, take notes, write

Question: “Write about the advantages and disadvantages of learning from online experts instead of from teachers.”

Read the text and take notes. Listen to the recording twice and take notes. Then write your text using ideas from both. Minimum 200 words.

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Read Take notes in the table.

Reading

The internet is full of experts who share their knowledge. Today, you can learn almost anything from online videos and courses. This has many advantages. Online lessons are often cheap or free, and you can study at any time, in any place. You can also watch a difficult lesson again and again until you understand it. In addition, you can choose from experts all over the world, not just the teachers in your own town. However, learning online also has disadvantages. There is no teacher in the room to answer your questions immediately or to correct your mistakes. If you do not understand something, you may stay confused. It is also easy to lose motivation when you study alone, because no one checks your work. Finally, not every expert online is truly qualified, so some information may be wrong or out of date. For these reasons, many people believe that online learning works best together with a real teacher. Because of this, many students now choose a mix of both. They watch online lessons to learn new ideas at their own speed, and they also meet a teacher or a study group to ask questions and stay motivated. This combination often gives the best results, because it uses the good points of both methods.

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Listen Twice — add notes to the table.

Listening

Play it twice. Take notes as you listen.

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Take notes

Learning from online expertsAdvantagesDisadvantages
Cost & time
Repeating
Choice
Mistakes & motivation
Best answer
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Now write your text Minimum 200 words.

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Writing task 2

Read, listen, take notes, write

Question: “What are the advantages and disadvantages of always following expert advice?”

Read the text and take notes. Listen to the recording twice and take notes. Then write your text using ideas from both. Minimum 200 words.

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Read Take notes in the table.

Reading

When we have a problem, we often ask an expert for advice. This has obvious advantages. Experts have studied their subject for many years, so their advice is usually reliable and can save us from making serious mistakes. For example, a doctor’s advice can protect our health, and a lawyer’s advice can keep us out of trouble. Following good advice can save us time, money, and worry. However, always following expert advice also has disadvantages. If we never think for ourselves, we may stop using our own judgement and become too dependent on others. Experts can also disagree with each other, which is confusing, and they are not always right. Sometimes, an expert may not understand our personal situation as well as we do. For these reasons, it is wise to listen to experts, but also to ask questions and make our own final decision. The best way to use expert advice is to treat it as help, not as an order. We should listen carefully, ask why the expert thinks this, and compare different opinions. Then we can make a decision that fits our own situation. In this way, we get the benefit of the expert’s knowledge without losing our own judgement.

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Listen Twice — add notes to the table.

Listening

Play it twice. Take notes as you listen.

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Take notes

Following expert adviceAdvantagesDisadvantages
Knowledge
Safety
Practical
Confidence
Best answer
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Now write your text Minimum 200 words.

0 / 200 words

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